Everyday, things change. The world spins: from dark to bright. People grow, they age. The other day my family and I noticed that my brother had gotten taller. Everybody thought it was a good thing, and they were all happy. I was the only who could see it for what it was.
The little baby, lying there on his small cradle was growing. He was no longer the sweet little baby brother i grew to love. And I noticed that no matter how hard i tried, there was nothing I could do.
I will always love him, no matter what. Its just sad how fast time flies by. Soon I'm going to be off to college, soon my brother is going to be off to college. I will savor all of our childhood moments. Its just sad that, In a blink of an eye its all over
The little baby, lying there on his small cradle was growing. He was no longer the sweet little baby brother i grew to love. And I noticed that no matter how hard i tried, there was nothing I could do.
I will always love him, no matter what. Its just sad how fast time flies by. Soon I'm going to be off to college, soon my brother is going to be off to college. I will savor all of our childhood moments. Its just sad that, In a blink of an eye its all over
I remember when Cameron was born. She is sixteen now. I remember a friend of my mother's saying that I should cherish every moment because in a blink of an eye she will be all grown. Well, I blinked and she is.
ReplyDeleteI love your memoir!
Mrs. Brown
Very good luis :) i liked how you described how fast things grow. I like you word choice and you title :)
ReplyDelete-Vivian
AW! That's really sweet, I like the beginning alot. The title makes alot of sence and you put alot of voice into the story. Bleh, i wish i had a little brother or sister!!
ReplyDeleteReally good. I like your title and the way you wrote it was great.
ReplyDeletewensley